The Call ~ with rewrite 1 posted
Time stands still...suspended in sorrow's seaas waves wash over mecruelly crushing cognitions course.The truth, a travesty, transforms realityfrom morning sun to mourning son.There is no air to...
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Helen...this is a very poignant piece of writing..."the call" or "that call" is all you'd need as a title...it is enough, I think!OK, let's look at this...it's in free form, so no forms to worry about...
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soulsease ~ Thank you for the time and thought expended here ~ I apologize for not proofreading more thoroughly, I have not learned how to cut/paste from Word to forums to eliminate the typos and I...
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In thinking it through , I decided to try a different tactic altogether in the last stanza. Does this work better, or do I need to go back to the drawing board? Which I'm quite willing to do if this...
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Helen...I am so sorry to hear that...this was a poignant piece before I knew the story behind it...but it takes on a whole new meaning now...I like the rewrite; I think it helps to clarify the story...
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soulsease~ I can't thank you enough for your time and thoughts ~ If I add an s to disconnect I'd have to add an s to leave that disconnectsand leaves lives severed by the sentenceand the same with...
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